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[原创]七绝·我要上学

2013-12-26 09:37:00| 分类：七绝 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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七绝

我要上学

家住山村峻岭绵，爷爷体弱病床前。

打工父母今何在？朗朗书声把我牵。

博友草山献诗

一捆木柴压嫩肩，力微路远坐坡前。

明眸凝望歌飞处，心在山中校舍间。

博友沈芃献诗

贫家女孩肩负担，柴草琐事身上缠。

校在咫尺无缘去，希冀上学眼望穿。

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家境贫寒山地绵【绵：一先】押韵
爷爷体弱病床前【前：一先】押韵
打工父母今何在
朗朗书声把我牵【牵：一先】押韵
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